"How to Tame a Wild Toungue"

For how much I wanted to like this piece I couldnt make myself do it. I hated the fact that there was a major disconnect and that I myself couldnt relate to her because of her writing style. The way she wrote this piece was very un organized and sloppy. I know it isnt right to tell someone to stop using thier language or keep it out of thier writing, but there was just something about it that I cannot bring myself to like. I feel like I am making the same judgements that she talks about in the piece and I dont exactly like reasons I give for not likeing her piece or her writing style but I cant seem to look past it. It was definately my least favorite piece we read all semester.